IY Sue #1

Fri, 16 Jun 2006 19:44:35 GMT

Story Title: The Gothic Gang
Author's Name: shessomarugirl13

Full Name/Nicknames: All canon characters (Yep that's right. She just couldn't create a character we could hate from the start, she just had to rape all of our canon charaters into hormonal teenage angsty wannabes) and Asuka/Asika.
Full Species(es): Preppy and perky!Gothic
Hair Color: Normal, I hope
Eye Color: Normal, I hope.
Unusual Markings: Goth!wear.
Possessions: Nothing of importance

Origin: Canon manga and anime.
Connections To Fandom: She put tha characters into an A/U. The end.
Special Abilities: None,
Other Annoying Traits:None. (Well, there are but I don't want to include anybodies' mother in this rant.)

It's not the fact that this fic is a high school story, it's that everything is rush. First day of school, she skips school with the Goth!Inu gang and ends up sleeping with them in one big bed, but the next morning Sesshomaru walks in on her in the bath tub and they sit there and have a little chat. Kagome walks home and is raped, then decides to unleash a can of whoop ass on the guy, walks home, and yells at her mother because of it. I guess there are no repercussions to being raped IN DAYLIGHT, might I add. The next day it's her birthday and she gets a car, then cue a big part and I just couldn't read anymore. The sad part is: (drumroll) There is a sequel! (curls up in fetal position) Mommy make the Suethor go away.

Excerpt:
Chapter One:
Third period: history.

Kagome was seated by inuyasha and sango when the teacher called her name; “higarashi, why did the klu klutz Klan start to kill people?” kagome looked up; “because, they did pranks at first, but when the fourth amendment, or was that the third…whatever, when one was passed, they started to kill people. They burned them on crosses, and burned them with screams and horrifying shrieks”

The teacher said; “thank you for that little…unnecessary example, kagome” kagome sat back down, while her friends laughed.

After class was study hall, again with her friends.

“So kagome, why did you move to America?” inuyasha said curious kagome shrugged; “I don’t know, my ma said it would be good for me, but yet again, I move a lot” they laughed; “excuse me, but I think some students want to study, if you have a problem with that, then you can leave” kagome stood up and said; “fine we will, right guys” they nodded in agreement and walked out of the room.

“”Lets skip school and go to my place” sesshomaru said; they all nodded.

“Ok, asuka, is with inuyasha, sango is with miroku, and kagome is with sesshomaru” they all got in the cars and drove off.

When they arrived at the house, kagome couldn’t help but having her mouth fall open.

Everyone went in but sesshomaru, and kagome.

Sesshomaru walked up behind her and wrapped his arms around her waist; “so you like mine, and inuyasha’s house?” kagome said; “house my ass, it’s a mansion!”

Sesshomaru laughed; when they walked inside they seen, sango and miroku making out, the same as inuyasha and asuka.

Kagome winked at sesshomaru and walked over to a arm chair.

Sesshomaru walked over and pulled kagome on his lap, so she was straddling him.

Sesshomaru said, while kagome laid her head on his chest; “how about we order pizza?” they all nodded and said a yes.

Sesshomaru got up, and called the pizza place.

Sesshomaru walked in and said; “what kind of movie do you want to watch guys?” they all said in union; “horror” sesshomaru nodded; “horror it is”

He was about to put in the movie when the doorbell rang.

He opened it up, paid the money, and grabbed the pizza.

He popped in the escapism of Emily rose and got some pops.

(I don’t know how to spell the firstword sorry)

Kagome and sesshomaru finished eating, and kagome had her head on sesshomaru’s chest, sleeping. Soon asuka and sango was sleeping on inuyasha’s and miroku’s chests. Sesshomaru fell asleep with kagome still on him.

Chapter Two:
Kagome woke up in warm arms; she looked up to see sesshomaru; she smiled.

She looked around to see everyone still sleeping, except sango, and asuka.

She got up and said; “I think I should take a bath, I will just put some of sesshomaru’s cloths on” she went to the room, got some of sesshomaru’s cloths, got the tub ready and got undressed.

While she was in there, sesshomaru wasn’t told kagome was taking a bathe he got some cloths, and went into the bathroom.

He blinked; there, kagome was sitting in his tub…naked; kagome looked at him and said; “hey…um why are you in here?” sesshomaru’s face went a faint red; “I…uh…well…” kagome laughed; “its ok, can you just leave, your lucky nothing is showing” sesshomaru nodded and hurried out of the bathroom.

Kagome came out of the bathroom in a black shirt that says: ‘Goth: I live for it’ and some baggy pale brown pants.

Sesshomaru seen her and smiled; “so you got my cloths?” kagome nodded; “my mom is going to be pissed that I stayed at a boys house overnight, and skipped school” kagome went to sit by sango and asuka.

“Well tell her…actually I have nothing, sesshomaru and me don’t have parents so we don’t have to worry about it” inuyasha said with a small sigh.

Kagome sighed; “well I better go home, sango, asika, you better go to if you don’t want your mom going off on you” they nodded and left.

Miroku sighed; “I better be on my way to” he got up and walked out of the door.

When they were gone inuyasha turned to sesshomaru, with an evil grin on his face; “you love her don’t you?” sesshomaru glared; “I don’t know what you say, little brother” inuyasha did a feh sound; “don’t lie, I seen you kissing her, and she was on your lap, that has to be something” sesshomaru sighed;

“Yes, I do, she knows it to”

Kagome walked home; “I really need to get my self a car” kagome said to her self.

Kagome was walking in a park when a gang of guys came her way; “hey, how about you and me go for a walk to my house hottie” kagome glared; “I am not one of those prissy little girls you guys are use to banging, I am a goth” they smiled; “we realized, all the better” kagome crossed her arms; “no I don’t think I will go with you” kagome spun on her heel and walked away.

They guy ran up behind her and grabbed hold of her wrist; “come on babe, it wont hurt” kagome was pushed to the ground, held by his friends.

Kagome wiggled; “let go of me you jackasses!” kagome yelled very loudly.

They laughed; “yea right, and let a person like you go, I don’t think so” he kissed her, stifling her cries of help.

Kagome wiggled, but his friends held down her hands and legs, tightly to.

Kagome froze when she felt him taking off sesshomaru’s goth shirt and throwing it aside.

They took her bra and pants off, ripping her underwear off.

Kagome shivered as a gust of wind came blowing.

Kagome felt him touch her, where she wanted sesshomaru to touch her; ‘great, I am going to be rape by a bunch of bozos’ kagome thought bitterly.

She gasped as he stuck his tongue in her womanhood, feeling her.

She kicked and screamed, trying to draw attention.

Her efforts weren’t answered.

How'd I do on my first Suethor post.

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IY Sue #1